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Feb. 4th, 2002 08:03 am
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Wage slave
Seconds slowly dying
All for the money
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Date: 2002-02-04 01:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] uknc.livejournal.com
Wrong number of syllables in the first and second lines.
To be Haiku, it needs 17 syllables.

Something like:

I am a Wage Slave
My seconds slowly dying
All for the money

Would work better.

Date: 2002-02-04 01:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] robinbloke.livejournal.com
I am diabolical at counting syllables, or indeed even spelling the word;
I thought
Wage slave
2 3
Seconds slowly dying
3 2 2
All for the money
1 1 1 2

Date: 2002-02-04 02:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karohemd.livejournal.com
Wage and slave both have 1 syllable, whereas seconds has two...

Date: 2002-02-04 02:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] robinbloke.livejournal.com
Told you I was cr@p at working out syllables.

To me its "way-jeh" "sl-ay-veh"

Date: 2002-02-04 09:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jonnyargles.livejournal.com
Yeah, if you're Rev. Lovejoy
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