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[robinbloke]

The last wisp of smoke curled away from the end of the cigarette, the red ember spluttering in the murky oil of the liquid on the floor.
"That only works in movies." said the voice from the other side of the garage, his point emphasided by the all too real barrel of the automatic he was holding.
The figure at the other side of the pool of petrol crouched, tensing for the moment, but the sudden sharp barking retort from the gun gave no warning.
The sound of the empty shell casing hitting the floor was drowned out by the much louder thump of a body falling onto the concrete.

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[karohemd.livejournal.com]

Is it too big? It's exactly 40KB and LJ sometimes has trouble with that.
I'll see if I can resample it a bit tonight.

[robinbloke.livejournal.com]

Nope; my connection was timing out on upload, I suspect it's the work link being pants.